alice dreaming

This play was about a girl called Alice and she tried to change the world but everyone thought she was weird. The show was a mixed Alice and wonderland and The wizard of oz. Alice dosent have any friends she meets some people and has fun with them. She eventually gets some new friends. Sadly one of them dies because of an animal atacked him. He is a bird and his name is albertrose. Whenever Alice is in trouble he flies her away with her in his wings. The thing i didnt get was at the start where everyone was yelling at her.

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I woke up in a wooden cabin. I got out of my bed i couldnt stand. I opened the door and saw some canons. I was on a pirate ship. The canons were at the sides of the ship. But then i saw a man steering the ship he turned around but i couldnt see it. It was pitch black under its cloke. Its hard to tell you what it looked like because it looked like nothing. I woke up i was in my room.

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i just couldent eat something so i did something else but pretty soon i got bored of that so i played with my trains. then i got bored of that so i went outside and started to climb a tree. i climbed down and made a cubby house out of leaves and sticks. i climed a tree so i could snap a ealy good branch of the top of the tree and then i slipped. i was falling and falling and crash i landed on my cuubby house and  it broke. i went into the house and played with my trains.Image result for cows

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